Tafari-dh's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Platform Bounce]

more glitter

not bad, but gets boring kind of quick, add flashing lights and movie objects to dazzle and distract, after all, appearance isn't every thing, but it damn important ;)

crushy responds:

of curse appearance is important

[Just another tutorial.]

too basic

man dats all a bunch of newb stuff, if your going to make a tut ya gotta at least deliver some intermediate action script, also the graphics were lame, and the way the menue droppes down doesn't look like a very good tween. not having good graphix and animation discredits you skills as a Flash person. you need to offer up somthing special so when people look at ur tut the think, hey i learned somthing.
so work on the graphix, animation, and try to take up a step, then it would be good.

faillekid responds:

the graphics are actually not bad.. you must be on crack. The tween is a tween.. its a tween how is it not a good one? I agree I need to add a lot more.
Thanks.

[Commissar Lives]

not bad

you need to make it so when you shot it doesn't make the bullets that are currently fireing disappear, fix that for both character and enemys. also why does he have a sheild if it doesn't work, the enyemys were shooting right through it...
not a start though

Jakeabod responds:

yo thanks, ill try to fix the gun shots so you can keep on shooting without them disappearing out of nowhere. And yes the shield doesn't really do anything that was just tacked on...maybe ill think of using it in the next game...if i do it

[Hearts 1.1]

needs better instructions

you should write better instructions as to that you use the mouse to fire the box, in the controls pannel it just talks about what key you press and makes no mention of how you fire the box, add better instrucitons, and thats all.....

DBarbarian responds:

You should read the instructions again. It's there.

[Funky Disco Zombies]

no pre-loader!!!

the screan just sat there blank white,
after about a minute or so thisit got boarding and i did not know how much loger i would have to sit through this boardom...
so a game that i was interested in i did not play and in fact voted it a zero, for one reason only...
no pre-loader
if you would like i'll send you preloader codes you could just drop in place and work. if you fix this problem let me know and i'll give your game a second chance vote fairly on your game.

Matmi responds:

Bit of a mistake. Forgot to attach preloader. Will upload corrected version tomorrow. Sorry :)