getting pretty good
i like what im seeing here,
above all your story flows nicely along
at first i didn't care for the animation style but then i grew on me as i became more apparent,
the only advice i could give would be mabey introduce the characters more, and thats not really a big issue right now, just somthing to think about
as with the last guy
i disagree completley,
not recognizing the dangers that out current presidential administration has put us in is pretty stupid...
wise up
Badmonkey91
good work, and keep it up
great series
i saw one, then had to watch the whole series, and i wasn't even stonned (when i started to watch).
i love the plots, never to deep or to shallow, but lets you in on what is happening and why.
Orlando is a great charactor because of his apathy, and turning Bummpy into a roach was a neat idea.
anyways i hope you make more of this series.
get a plot
the style and animation were cool, but there was no point. elaberate a plot or add alot of hummor either way make it more interesting, becuase the animation was good but unfunny pointless stuff like that will only get you
1/5
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PWNZORSZ LAWL N00B
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some times the stuff on the front page can be a let down, and then there is stuff like this. hell yeah,
<asskiss>original, funny, well animated, clean, to the point, well ploted, and the best part its true!</asskiss>
keep it up 5/5
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nice work
i really liked the plot i thought it flowed nicely. the graphics and animation were all right, it was kind of neat how the graphics shifted along. the only thing that was not very good was the sound, and i know thats hard to help but try this free ware,
audacity (dot)sourceforge (dot) net<this is only to help please don't delet this review> you might be able to touch it up. hope that will help, keep up the good work.
you can delete reviews?
a breath of fresh air
well done. i liked the lite texture in you animation, the sound was a little gruff but still well done. the best part of this was the topic, i have never seen the resperatory process animated in such a fun way.
nice work.
i eight
ehh, it was defiantly short, too short if you ask me. it was ok but no the kind of quality that normaly make front page, you should actaully add a plot to it, kuz right now it's just a cool short animation when it could easly be somthing more with a little work, or well actaully it will take a lot of work and time, but if you really want to make somthing cool expand the plot.
too loud
you need to cut your volume a little bit, i had my pc on the lowest sound setting and i still thought it was too loud.
you could have used more black space in your illustration, since its only black and white, its important how you handel the black and white spaces.
the trans sceenes between reality and animation were cool, i would count this one as good practice to do somthing better, keep it up.
btw.... POD suxed along time ago, and im pretty sure they still do.
Thanks for the review.
However some points to be made.
Sound could be set really quiet on my computer and same on the University computers so sound volume was your problem.
My choice of music was my preference. You may not like it but I wanted it so that should not matter.
Yes it is black and white, not sure what you were getting at but I was trying to get it to blend in well with my profile.
Thanks anyways
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