too loud
you need to cut your volume a little bit, i had my pc on the lowest sound setting and i still thought it was too loud.
you could have used more black space in your illustration, since its only black and white, its important how you handel the black and white spaces.
the trans sceenes between reality and animation were cool, i would count this one as good practice to do somthing better, keep it up.
btw.... POD suxed along time ago, and im pretty sure they still do.